英语期末考试优秀作文选 ( I )

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题目：Is a Training Class or Family Tachr Ncssary?

舒瑶（12班）

Mor and mor middl school studnts ar going to all kinds of training classs or having family tachrs at th wknd . Thr ar two diffrnt viwpoints about it.

Som popl think that it is ncssary .First , thy can larn bttr with th hlp of th tachrs than by thmslvs. Scond , thy can strngthn what thy larn in class. Third , thy can gt mor usful things in thos classs.

Howvr , othr popl insist that it is not ncssary. For on thing, studnts will not listn carfully in thir normal classs if thy can gt th sam knowldg in training classs. For anothr thing, most snior studnts havn’t nough tim to rst . What’s wors, th purpos of most of th training classs and family tachrs is to arn mony.

In my opinion, a training class or family tachr is not ncssary. W can study wll at school if w work hard.

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陈颖 (7班)

Mor and mor middl school studnts ar going to all kinds of training classs or having family tachrs at th wknd. Thr ar two diffrnt viwpoints about it.

Som popl think that a training class or family tachr is quit ncssary. Following a tachr is always bttr than slf study. For on thing, it can strngthn th knowldg in class, for anothr, studnts can larn mor.

But som othr popl think it is unncssary to hav classs lik this. Firstly, studnts may asily gt into th habit of dpnding on othrs. Scondly, holiday is tim for rst, studnts can’t kp studying without any rst. And what’s mor, most training classs and family tachrs ar in th purpos of making mony. Studnts can’t gt good ducation in such classs.

In my opinion, diffrnt studnts hav diffrnt situation. If a studnt is not good at slf study, mayb a training class is fit for him. But if a studnt think that h could trust himslf, h will nvr nd it.

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雷洋 ( 21 班 )

Mor and mor middl school studnts ar going to all kinds of training classs or having family tachrs at th wknd. Thr ar two diffrnt viwpoints about it.

Som popl think that it’s ncssary to go to training classs or hav family tachrs. In thir opinions, following th tachrs’ instructions is mor hlpful than slf study. For on thing, studnts may strngthn what thy hav larnd in class; for anothr, thy can study much mor from th tachr.

Howvr, othr popl think that it’s not ncssary to do so, bcaus dpnding on tachrs is a bad habit. Bsids, studnts should hav tim to tak a rst and quit a lot of tachrs in training classs ar not strict with th studnts. Thy just car about th mony that will go to thir pockt.本作文共6页,当前在第1页123456